Though the lighting from outside seemed very convenient and attractive,I had a "bizarre premonition"(1) with this name which kept the reluctance switch on (2) to move into the place.1. Unnecessary quotes for premonitions.
2. 'reluctance switch on to move into the place' - why switch on? A simple 'made me reluctant to enter' would be fine. 'Move into the place' is to mean 'to permanently live' in the place, not just enter a place.
But well, it was my boyfriend’s birthday, I wanted to take him to a very authentic place. He is very passionate about these historical places and heroic stories.. Uh gawd.. I hate the chronologies(3) though :-(3. 'hate the chronologies' ? - she means historical dates. Unnecessary big word, wrongly used. Chronology is not a synonym for history, they don't mean the same thing).
Cut cut cut!!!! But when I entered there after a long day’s work with lots of expectations, trust me I was disappointed to the measure of exponents (4) :-(4. 'measure of exponents' is a convoluted way of saying simply 'I was exponentially disappointed'. Also, exponents are not a measure like liter, or mile, but signify order of magnitude.
The seating arrangement there is kinda clumsy and you feel like you are in a moving train filled with people. If you have journey sickness in train, avoid this place. Besides, though the train is very well-made and has an amazing historic look to it, the, especially the service part. It was like, the waiters there had a fervor there was not very welcoming (5), especially the service part. It was like, the waiters there had a quizzical (6) look of :eh, when will you leave?" look. I also felt like , the train was very very very crowded. You cant even stretch your legs and relax with ease.5. Fervor was not welcoming ? I suppose she wants to say energy, or ambience. Fervor means 'great warmth, earnestness of feeling'. Try substituting now :-) "the great warmth was not welcoming"- a contradiction of meaning, if anything.
But the food was quite good. No comments on that. Not really true that, it was exotically tantalizing that I just became a glutton from a gourmet :-/ It was just about average.6. Tranquil is an adjective. Either 'the place is tranquil', or 'its a place with tranquility'.
Well, people please go there on a weekday, when you can see less passengers in the train to enjoy it . Please don’t go when you are exhausted, not really a place with tranquil (6).
