Come to me (Ravishankar)

Come to me (Ravishankar)

I read the first version, I liked it better. It was more ...well, punchy, assertive. It was long, but it didn't lose steam anywhere. You're probably thinking - this goes to prove you can't please everyone :-). I wouldn't understand what you're saying as well as I do now, had I not read the first version.

Aparna