Wednesday, August 15, 2007

AND HOW (darknite)

AND HOW

And how will you
feel then, when the joy
sets back in
and you're no longer left
to wonder what to do
with what was?
O how you will feel then!

- darknite on Caferati.

I wish I could say how much the size of this poem appeals to me. A single clear thought in just as many words as needed.

In many poems, the words run on long after the thought is over. In my cartoon-obsessed brain, its like Tom chasing Jerry over a cliff and past the edge, continuing to run impossibly on, until mid-air, he looks down and realizes he's run out of ground.