Purdah: Poem (Manjul Bajaj)

Read it on Caferati

Its not too long. Really good flow, there were no continuity breaks or loss of focus. Conforming to tradition, the ghosts of tradition, interesting ideas as well.
Liked the phrase "the dour doyenas".
"Letting only the chaff seep" - Liquids seep, chaff is solid. What do you think?
Aparna
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Mar 1 : 9:56am
Slip, fall or escape, all would work.

Aparna