Valentine (Ityaadi)

Read it on Caferati

That is a complex feeling you have tried to put down - Shame, hurt, rejection, helplessness. I liked it. The crucifixion image goes farther than any other I think of, in describing the violence of her act, as it appears to the valentine giver. Have to agree with Annie, the 3rd, 4th line reduce the punch a bit.
Aparna