Tuesday, March 13, 2007

poem read by Mohammad Ahsan at the lucknow read meet (Rehana Ali)

poem read by Mohammad Ahsan at the lucknow read meet (Rehana Ali)

Maybe this should be in prose. Have you noticed the sentences have a prose form, rather than verse form?

(I haven't changed any words below, just joined the sentences)

"One wondered where one was. Probably it was a big hall, where myriads colors and shades danced, or one wondered, were they really colors or human forms. They merged in each other and reemerged, some of them dancing in frenzy, others walking or just chit chatting with others. One moment they looked like colors, the other moment some human forms. Sometimes whole thing got blurred, they were just some undefined form and frame dancing as they do in a skating rink, or onlookers. "

etc...
Aparna
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