Saturday, June 9, 2007

Older - 4 (Peter Griffin)

You look at me and think
Old man.
You don’t see the toddler
Gawping at a world
Where all was new.

continue..

Thanks for the formatting tips.

If that was irony I felt in the capitalized Work Bag and Work Clothes, I thought it might be extended to First Paycheck.

The following is only point I thought is a little overstated.
"The bald scalp
The crumbling face
The stumble
The stiffness"

Will wait to see the new version.
Aparna