Run...(continue reading)
What all I escaped
Colors, textures, and words
All that was mystique
Crystal clarity blurred
That was good. I feel the second stanza about aging is particularly good - "Beckon to unbecome". As the above comment says, couple of places where the beat changes could be tinkered with. The first line "what all I missed" is a literal translation of a phrase from the native tongue, the English usage would be "All that I missed", or "Everything I missed".
Aparna
